(New Gurl In Sku) ~ Guillermo Rodriguez

  • Damn I’m hooked on the new gurl in school
  • Pretty dark brown hair
  • Pretty eyes
  • Beautiful light brown skin
  • She’s gotta be an angel from above
  • Cause of what she told me she wants true love
  • Second day at school and I walked her to her bus
  • We talked and got to know each other along the way
  • She hasn’t come to school
  • But I wish I could go back to the date of December 9th of 2008
  • She thinks all boys are the same
  • But hopefully I can be her love and make that thought change
  • I’m in love with the new gurl in school.

One response

7 01 2009
Peggy Jenkins, GEAR UP Writing Specialist

Guillermo, what a sweet and heartfelt poem! I loved the repetition between the first and last lines and the picture you paint of the new “gurl.” Write on,Peggy Jenkins, Writing Specialist, GEAR UP

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