Who I am
I’m a growing man expiriencing
People may see me as a happy person,
new things. I am growing and also like a funny guy.
learning from my misstakes.
It is difficult when you don’t
have a father around but
you try.
Who I am
I’m a growing man expiriencing
People may see me as a happy person,
new things. I am growing and also like a funny guy.
learning from my misstakes.
It is difficult when you don’t
have a father around but
you try.
dam i know how you feel dawq..
i think this poem is really nice yaid(=
Ithink this poem is interesting because it starts the sentence, goes on to another and finishes the first sentence somewhere else.
i feel the same way not having a father around but it gets better and better sometimes it makes you a happy person and other times it will make you in to a worst person most people just don’t wont to be around
Even though you are a pain in the butt at times, I know were your coming from.
Poignant Yaid – you have talent!
I love the way you set the words up in short but powerful statements.
In a few words “it is difficult…but you try” you say so much about loss and courage. Write on! Peggy Jenkins, GEAR UP Writing Specialist