{Untitled} ~ Yaid Zavala

Hours past on, nights came on by,

I was alone until she came to my side.

Once I was with her the world changed,

I didn’t see anything the same

I woke up and fall asleep with her on my mind,

I found what I once was hopping to find.

If I really could I would give her all,

All of a sudden she couldn’t see what I saw.

I really thought nothing could get better,

But now I know nothing lasts forever.

2 responses

13 11 2008
Peggy Jenkins

Yaid,
What a beautiful, sad poem. The great thing about love is that we get many chances in life for it to come to us. I can totally relate to the feeling of being alone until the loved one appears at your side…and also to the feeling of loss when the beloved no longer sees what you see. I am definitely going to show this poem to my boyfriend.
Thanks,
Peggy Jenkins
GEAR UP Writing Specialist

18 11 2008
isaac

Dang Yaid that poem is freaking sexy!!!!!!!!!!!! Hope you find a true love.

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